wall of rage

The whole house is upside down
Pillows on the floor
And clothes around
the showers running cold
as cold as it can get
upon my exhausted nerves
yet defenseless vibes
vaporise
passing over my heated head
clenched teeth
tightened fists
could break a hundred fortress,
but not the wall of rage

4 thoughts on “wall of rage

  1. huh. . . try _colder_ shower
    I find it very relaxing

    ===
    //the wall of rage// it must be moving

  2. what builds this wall of rage?
    what mortar binds its bricks?
    what mason sets its line
    that defines such geometry?
    open above (the sky)
    open below (the earth)
    both boundless paths for escape
    come… come… free yourself

    (Suki chan thanks for impromptu inspiration)

  3. when one is in rage and takes a cold shower
    it feels like a shock-but kind of a needed shock

    i have done it even in winter
    and the heart beat kind of freezes
    the body kind of numbs
    and then the chill and shivers run rampant thru’ ur head
    the wall of rage has melted!!

  4. chibi san,
    thats so beautiful!

    open above
    open below
    both boundless paths for escape…

    the trouble is with the vines inbetween
    the much alluring vines
    that keep you entangled
    we so much love to be like the vines

    we stay around, we creep around
    we build walls to creep upon
    and sometimes they take your green blood
    and turn you red

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